Nouveau Petite
can someone please help me with some french editing? I don’t know how to fix this…?
Lorsqu’Adrien Thério décrivais le Carré Dominion, comme c’était en 1974, on apprend que c’était un carré dont l’architecture environnante reflétait une transition entre l’ancien et le nouveau. Aujourd’hui, si on se place au carré, maintenant appelé Square Dorchester, on peut observer la même transition: l’hôtel Champlain domine ce qui reste de l’édifice orné de l’hôtel Windsor tout comme l’immeuble de bureaux près de l’hôtel Windsor; les maisons qui abritent des boutiques et restaurants et l’église gothique Saint-Georges sont toujours petite par rapport à la colossale Banque impériale canadienne de commerce.
Décrivait instead of décrivais
I would say “comme il était” instead of “comme c’était”
Maybe a “.” at the end of second Windsor and start another sentence. (Also, you repeat hôtel Windsor twice in the same sentence…not a big deal but…)
petite should be petites
Other than that, good vocabulary, good grammar 
Petite battle de batterie, Shaka Ponk, Nouveau Casino de Paris 04/03/09
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